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Bonjour !
Tout d'abord, je veux te dire que tu feras mieux d'enlever le smiley après " Hello Elvira ".
Tu feras mieux d'écrire : I have two brothers, ...... (prénom) who is 16, and ..... (prénom) who is 11 years old. My mother is a housewife, and my father is an english teacher. I'm medium sized, and I have almond shaped black eyes. I have short (couleur et taille) hair. There is lots of greenery and activities in my city. I love drawing and reading philosophical books. I like my school because people are very nice .... (met la suite, s'il-te-plait).